The first draft is getting a stern editing for clarity, funkadelic grammar lapses, and other things I haven’t found yet.
Some days I love it and other days I am in agony.
This sure is fun!!
*Orange is for read-through editing progress.

The first draft is getting a stern editing for clarity, funkadelic grammar lapses, and other things I haven’t found yet. Some days I love it and other days I am in agony. This sure is fun!! *Orange is for read-through editing progress.
The first draft is getting a stern editing for clarity, funkadelic grammar lapses, and other things I haven’t found yet.
Some days I love it and other days I am in agony.
This sure is fun!!
*Orange is for read-through editing progress.
Waddaya think?